Dr. Jamie Bondage

Alex: "Look, I have a contract. A mission. I thought...I thought you were a traitor. I suppose I was wrong." He ran his hands through his hair. "Do you want ...

XD Thanks Rick. =p

Awh...*cries* Not my Jared! Lol. Um...Errant and Lauren Malfroy?

Dali: I noticed that one of the head masters was talking with another master and wondered what was up. Why wasn't Alex talking with them? In fact, where was Alex? ...

Thank you very much. Just wondering what others thought. XD I appriciate it!

(Sorry. Is posting now! XD) Alex: He saw her. That same stupid girl who had caused him to be late. And yet, she was so beautiful. He had never felt ...

*Beth's droping out.*

Don't I don't want you just to tell me you love me. I want you to tell me you can't live without me. I don't want you to just tell ...

Alex: He decided that he could not return without completing his mission. He dashed off in the direction that the Sheik had taken. Hours later, he arrived exhausted. He checked ...

looks like I was beat to the punch. See, I told you if you spaced it out you would get a lot of crits! XD So...yeah. =p Since everyone else ...

Yes, I just realized people were posting! *is very upset* You killed my Riley! *cries* Why did you kill Riley! Btw, Sean is now dead!

Awh! I didn't even get to say goodbye! *cries* And of course, Sean is going to die now. Beth is mad. XD Beth: I cried out in horror furious. How ...

Lol. Alex: He had no choice but to give up. The Sheik was hours away...and he knew he was late meeting with the other Masters. He cursed himself again. That ...

*Okay...then he was just late. XD) Alex: He arrived in another one of the small towns, galloping in on his horse. He stoped at an inn and rushed to the ...

If you space this out a bit and make actual paragraphs, you will get more critiques. The way it is, it is really hard to read, and therefore discourages people ...